The ALA Report

So, you can pop on over to Galleycat to read about all the prize winners but, for what it's worth, here's one author's roundup of the amazing weekend that was ALA Midwinter 2013...

Why this picture of me in a very tacky 1970s tutu here? Well, I am loathing blogger right now because it no longer lets me upload pix from my computer but only via Picasa, which I don't really know how to work, and this is one of the few pictures that somehow meandered into accessibility. Also, I know that tacky, unimportant and a little exposed is how many authors who AREN'T being wined and dined by their publishers, whose ARCs are in piles all over the exhibit hall, who DON'T have a book coming out this very spring feel at ALA. But I am here to tell you that they shouldn't.  I was delighted to be given a conference badge by my publisher, THRILLED to have met Penguin's amazing PacNW rep for cofffee, and fascinating by the presentation given by the dynamic Liz Van Doren of Boyds Mills Press (they have this incredible picture book about Thomas Jefferson's library coming out next year that I will preorder the second it's available).

If you realize how much you can learn, collect a dainty number of arcs that you plan to read and blog about, do a little fangirling, and celebrate the amazing opportunity you have to make any contribution to this great and beautiful world of literature of which you are a part, then you should not feel tacky and ten-year-old-ish, but stand proud and listen well. Learn and be inspired.  Wear a coat, because Seattle is damp and cold in January!

Other favorite moments...

• Hosting the exquisite wordsmith and all-around sweetie pie Katherine Longshore at my place. (Thanks for enduring my noisy boys and smelly dog!)
• Getting yelled at by Libba Bray's husband, Barry Goldblatt, for my failure to recognize the distinction between paranormal and urban fantasy literature. Okay, fangirled a little here.
• Catching up with former colleagues from Random House, Simon & Schuster and other houses, having them press books they loved into my hands, and being reminded how many people in this business truly love it.
•  Lunch with friend and sf/fantasy literature editor genius, Susan Chang. (Cannot wait for Tor Teen's release of P.J. Hoover's SOLSTICE.)
•  Catching up with Sara from Novel Novice, Candace from Candace's Book Blog, and other terrific bloggers.
•  Super-fun dinner with J. Anderson Coates, Helen Landalf, Karen Kincy, Deb Lund, Dawn Simon, Karen Finneyfrock, Chelsea Campbell, Katy Longshore and...oh I know I'm missing some people.
•  One more time because she is an absolute east-coast-talking, hilarious tower of awesome, I'll once again mention coffee with Colleen :)
•  Finally, returning home inspired to write, excited to be part of this whole thing in some small way.

Bookanistas: WHATCHA BEEN READING?

Some writers say they can't read while they're in the midst of a manuscript. I go back and forth on this. I try to avoid books that feel too closely related to my work, but ending the day curled up with a book instead of staring at a TV screen can help to keep me in the right frame of mind for writing.

So, though deep in the throes of my w-i-p, I have nonetheless done a surprising amount of reading these past few weeks.  Sadly, I haven't had time to review them all but I thought I'd share a short list of titles I've recently enjoyed (some are reviewed here on the site):

PLEASE IGNORE VERA DIETZ by A. S. King
SOLSTICE by P. J. Hoover
CODE NAME VERITY by Elizabeth Wein
TARNISH by Katherine Longshore
THE RITHMATIST by Brandon Sanderson

When I hit "send" and my MS becomes (for awhile) my editor's problem, I'm looking forward to reading TELL THE WOLVES I'M HOME, as well as CROSSED by Allie Condie and PANDEMONIUM by Lauren Oliver--I think these two would make an interesting pairing.

What should I add to my tantalizing soon-to-read list?

Craft Chat: Three Revision Passes

I am working my way through revisions before sending my current manuscript to my editor. Once I've laid the story onto the pages, I go back through the manuscript multiple times. Here are three of my revision techniques.

1. The Outline
When I write a verse novel, I number the poems. It helps me keep the ideas, pacing in order. My first revision pass consists of writing an outline of the novel with a one-line plot/theme description of each poem. This helps me look at story flow and spot gaps where characters or ideas are missing for too long.

2. Would She Say It?
For this one, I play a bunch of music that gets me into the head of my MC and then reread the MS again, beginning-to-end) asking myself if each line (dialogue or internal monologue) attributed to my MC feels true to her character.

3. The Mark Twain Pass
You know the old saw "I didn't have time to write you a short letter, so I wrote you a long one"? I go back through the ms to eliminate RESTATEMENTS, ADVERBS, UNNECCESARY ANALOGIES, AND OVERWORKED IMAGES.

These are just three of the many passes I give the ms before turning in. I envy people who can sort of work forward without rereading their whole blasted book so many times. Alas, I do catch a lot of typos.

How many times to you read a MS before you consider it ready to share? Any suggestions to help compulsive re-readers like myself? ADVICE ALWAYS WELCOME :)

Happy Monday!

Bookanistas: CODE NAME VERITY by Elizabeth Wein

Plot without spoilers...Is this possible? Britain. WWII. Two young girls--one a pilot, one a society girl--find themselves behind enemy lines in Germain-occupied France.

Of literary interest...The book deals with dualities in both structural and thematic ways. Two nations, two young women, two narrators, two identities (not gonna give you more on this, just trust me). Yet, like the story itself, the dualities shift and slide, narrators name themselves then reveal other identities; good and evil, right and wrong, hope and despair, are continually questioned and redefined. A breathtakingly well-written book--a breathless read.

Finally, just gotta say...This is an astonishing, well-crafted and finely-researched novel.  It is a spy story, laden with twists, so it's difficult to say too much without giving something away, which would be very unfair to the many readers this book should have. Sometimes I read a highly-hyped book and kind of finish with, "huh, well, a good read but maybe not the great read I was expecting." CODE NAME VERITY lives up to its praise and exceeds expectations. Definitely destined for "Best Lists."